Clean up copy, remove some ChatGPT emdashes, add some of my own

cockpit-iq/src/pages/index.astro

@@ -2,16 +2,16 @@
 import Layout from "../layouts/Layout.astro";
 ---
 
-<Layout>
+<Layout title="Cockpit IQ: Intelligent Comms for Pilots">
 	<section class="px-6 py-12 max-w-3xl mx-auto text-center">
 		<h1 class="text-4xl font-bold mb-4">Cockpit IQ</h1>
 		<p class="text-lg text-gray-700 mb-6">
-			A smarter way to fly in busy airspace.
+			The smarter way to fly in busy airspace.
 		</p>
 		<p class="text-md text-gray-600 mb-8">
 			Real-time radio transcription, callsign alerts, and intelligent
-			comms assistance— built for high-performance GA and turboprop
+			comms assistance. Built for high-performance cockpits where safety
-			cockpits.
+			and situational awareness are paramount.
 		</p>
 		<a
 			href="#waitlist"
@@ -26,10 +26,10 @@ import Layout from "../layouts/Layout.astro";
 				Ever missed a call from ATC?
 			</h2>
 			<p class="text-gray-700">
-				When the workload spikes—radio chatter, ATC instructions,
+				When the workload spikes, you need more than a headset. Cockpit
-				weather deviations—you need more than a headset. Cockpit IQ
+				IQ listens, remembers, and highlights what matters. So you can
-				listens, remembers, and highlights what matters. So you can
+				stay ahead of the aircraft, focus on the mission, and maybe even
-				focus on flying, not parsing static.
+				enjoy the view.
 			</p>
 		</div>
 	</section>
@@ -41,27 +41,35 @@ import Layout from "../layouts/Layout.astro";
 		<ul class="space-y-4 text-left text-gray-800">
 			<li>
 				<strong>Callsign Detection:</strong> Flashes a light or replays audio
-				when ATC calls you.
+				when ATC calls you, getting your attention even when you’re busy.
 			</li>
 			<li>
-				<strong>Live Transcription:</strong> Real-time, color-coded display
+				<strong>Live Transcription:</strong> Real-time, color-coded history
-				of all ATC comms.
+				of all ATC comms, organized by frequency and callsign.
 			</li>
 			<li>
-				<strong>Instant Replay:</strong> Missed a call? Tap once to hear
+				<strong>On-Demand Replay:</strong> Tap to hear any call again &mdash;
-				it again.
+				not just the most recent.
 			</li>
 			<li>
-				<strong>Clearance Copilot:</strong> Transcribes and visualizes your
+				<strong>Digital CFII:</strong> Transcribes and organizes your IFR
-				IFR clearance.
+				clearance, visualizes your holding pattern, and more.
 			</li>
 			<li>
-				<strong>Situational Awareness Model:</strong> Understand who’s ahead
+				<strong>Situational Awareness Model:</strong> Understand who's ahead
-				of you, what turbulence they’re reporting, and what’s coming.
+				of you, what turbulence they're reporting, and what to expect ahead.
+				If they're deviating for weather or changing altitude, you probably
+				will too.
 			</li>
 			<li>
 				<strong>ADS-B Enhanced:</strong> Combine audio with ADS-B for predictive
-				traffic and routing insights.
+				traffic and routing insights. Cockpit IQ builds a full mental model
+				of the airspace around you, using all the data at your fingertips.
+			</li>
+			<li>
+				<strong>Radio Pro:</strong> Cockpit IQ can suggest responses based
+				on the context of the conversation &mdash; or even respond for you,
+				with perfect phraseology and no accent, no matter where you are.
 			</li>
 		</ul>
 	</section>
@@ -72,9 +80,9 @@ import Layout from "../layouts/Layout.astro";
 				Built for demanding cockpits.
 			</h2>
 			<p class="text-gray-700">
-				Whether you’re flying a PA-46, a Cirrus, or a TBM—Cockpit IQ
+				Whether you're flying a Cessna, a Pilatus, or a Dreamliner,
-				gives you clarity when you need it most. Trusted by student
+				Cockpit IQ gives you clarity when you need it most. Trusted by
-				pilots, pro instructors, fleet managers, and international
+				student pilots, instructors, fleet managers, and multinational
 				operators.
 			</p>
 		</div>
@@ -82,12 +90,13 @@ import Layout from "../layouts/Layout.astro";
 
 	<section class="px-6 py-12 max-w-3xl mx-auto text-center">
 		<h2 class="text-2xl font-bold mb-4">
-			Easy to install. Powerful by design.
+			Easy to use, powerful by design.
 		</h2>
 		<p class="text-gray-700 mb-6">
-			Cockpit IQ connects in-line with your audio panel—just like a GoPro
+			Cockpit IQ connects in-line with your headset cable, just like a
-			mic. All processing happens locally. No cloud. No subscriptions.
+			GoPro mic. All processing happens locally on the device, without
-			Just intelligent, cockpit-ready support.
+			reliance on internet or satellite links. No clouds but the real
+			ones.
 		</p>
 		<a
 			href="#waitlist"