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import Layout from "../layouts/Layout.astro";
---
<Layout>
<Layout title="Cockpit IQ: Intelligent Comms for Pilots">
<section class="px-6 py-12 max-w-3xl mx-auto text-center">
<h1 class="text-4xl font-bold mb-4">Cockpit IQ</h1>
<p class="text-lg text-gray-700 mb-6">
A smarter way to fly in busy airspace.
The smarter way to fly in busy airspace.
</p>
<p class="text-md text-gray-600 mb-8">
Real-time radio transcription, callsign alerts, and intelligent
comms assistance— built for high-performance GA and turboprop
cockpits.
comms assistance. Built for high-performance cockpits where safety
and situational awareness are paramount.
</p>
<a
href="#waitlist"
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Ever missed a call from ATC?
</h2>
<p class="text-gray-700">
When the workload spikes—radio chatter, ATC instructions,
weather deviations—you need more than a headset. Cockpit IQ
listens, remembers, and highlights what matters. So you can
focus on flying, not parsing static.
When the workload spikes, you need more than a headset. Cockpit
IQ listens, remembers, and highlights what matters. So you can
stay ahead of the aircraft, focus on the mission, and maybe even
enjoy the view.
</p>
</div>
</section>
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<ul class="space-y-4 text-left text-gray-800">
<li>
<strong>Callsign Detection:</strong> Flashes a light or replays audio
when ATC calls you.
when ATC calls you, getting your attention even when youre busy.
</li>
<li>
<strong>Live Transcription:</strong> Real-time, color-coded display
of all ATC comms.
<strong>Live Transcription:</strong> Real-time, color-coded history
of all ATC comms, organized by frequency and callsign.
</li>
<li>
<strong>Instant Replay:</strong> Missed a call? Tap once to hear
it again.
<strong>On-Demand Replay:</strong> Tap to hear any call again &mdash;
not just the most recent.
</li>
<li>
<strong>Clearance Copilot:</strong> Transcribes and visualizes your
IFR clearance.
<strong>Digital CFII:</strong> Transcribes and organizes your IFR
clearance, visualizes your holding pattern, and more.
</li>
<li>
<strong>Situational Awareness Model:</strong> Understand whos ahead
of you, what turbulence theyre reporting, and whats coming.
<strong>Situational Awareness Model:</strong> Understand who's ahead
of you, what turbulence they're reporting, and what to expect ahead.
If they're deviating for weather or changing altitude, you probably
will too.
</li>
<li>
<strong>ADS-B Enhanced:</strong> Combine audio with ADS-B for predictive
traffic and routing insights.
traffic and routing insights. Cockpit IQ builds a full mental model
of the airspace around you, using all the data at your fingertips.
</li>
<li>
<strong>Radio Pro:</strong> Cockpit IQ can suggest responses based
on the context of the conversation &mdash; or even respond for you,
with perfect phraseology and no accent, no matter where you are.
</li>
</ul>
</section>
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Built for demanding cockpits.
</h2>
<p class="text-gray-700">
Whether youre flying a PA-46, a Cirrus, or a TBM—Cockpit IQ
gives you clarity when you need it most. Trusted by student
pilots, pro instructors, fleet managers, and international
Whether you're flying a Cessna, a Pilatus, or a Dreamliner,
Cockpit IQ gives you clarity when you need it most. Trusted by
student pilots, instructors, fleet managers, and multinational
operators.
</p>
</div>
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<section class="px-6 py-12 max-w-3xl mx-auto text-center">
<h2 class="text-2xl font-bold mb-4">
Easy to install. Powerful by design.
Easy to use, powerful by design.
</h2>
<p class="text-gray-700 mb-6">
Cockpit IQ connects in-line with your audio panel—just like a GoPro
mic. All processing happens locally. No cloud. No subscriptions.
Just intelligent, cockpit-ready support.
Cockpit IQ connects in-line with your headset cable, just like a
GoPro mic. All processing happens locally on the device, without
reliance on internet or satellite links. No clouds but the real
ones.
</p>
<a
href="#waitlist"