From 5839af1d399a33c238d5aecc3e2a686bb7636bdc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: ryan Date: Mon, 2 Jun 2025 19:23:17 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Clean up copy, remove some ChatGPT emdashes, add some of my own --- cockpit-iq/src/pages/index.astro | 59 ++++++++++++++++++-------------- 1 file changed, 34 insertions(+), 25 deletions(-) diff --git a/cockpit-iq/src/pages/index.astro b/cockpit-iq/src/pages/index.astro index 244e070..6379856 100644 --- a/cockpit-iq/src/pages/index.astro +++ b/cockpit-iq/src/pages/index.astro @@ -2,16 +2,16 @@ import Layout from "../layouts/Layout.astro"; --- - +

Cockpit IQ

- A smarter way to fly in busy airspace. + The smarter way to fly in busy airspace.

Real-time radio transcription, callsign alerts, and intelligent - comms assistance— built for high-performance GA and turboprop - cockpits. + comms assistance. Built for high-performance cockpits where safety + and situational awareness are paramount.

- When the workload spikes—radio chatter, ATC instructions, - weather deviations—you need more than a headset. Cockpit IQ - listens, remembers, and highlights what matters. So you can - focus on flying, not parsing static. + When the workload spikes, you need more than a headset. Cockpit + IQ listens, remembers, and highlights what matters. So you can + stay ahead of the aircraft, focus on the mission, and maybe even + enjoy the view.

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  • Callsign Detection: Flashes a light or replays audio - when ATC calls you. + when ATC calls you, getting your attention even when you’re busy.
  • - Live Transcription: Real-time, color-coded display - of all ATC comms. + Live Transcription: Real-time, color-coded history + of all ATC comms, organized by frequency and callsign.
  • - Instant Replay: Missed a call? Tap once to hear - it again. + On-Demand Replay: Tap to hear any call again — + not just the most recent.
  • - Clearance Copilot: Transcribes and visualizes your - IFR clearance. + Digital CFII: Transcribes and organizes your IFR + clearance, visualizes your holding pattern, and more.
  • - Situational Awareness Model: Understand who’s ahead - of you, what turbulence they’re reporting, and what’s coming. + Situational Awareness Model: Understand who's ahead + of you, what turbulence they're reporting, and what to expect ahead. + If they're deviating for weather or changing altitude, you probably + will too.
  • ADS-B Enhanced: Combine audio with ADS-B for predictive - traffic and routing insights. + traffic and routing insights. Cockpit IQ builds a full mental model + of the airspace around you, using all the data at your fingertips. +
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  • + Radio Pro: Cockpit IQ can suggest responses based + on the context of the conversation — or even respond for you, + with perfect phraseology and no accent, no matter where you are.
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- Whether you’re flying a PA-46, a Cirrus, or a TBM—Cockpit IQ - gives you clarity when you need it most. Trusted by student - pilots, pro instructors, fleet managers, and international + Whether you're flying a Cessna, a Pilatus, or a Dreamliner, + Cockpit IQ gives you clarity when you need it most. Trusted by + student pilots, instructors, fleet managers, and multinational operators.

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- Easy to install. Powerful by design. + Easy to use, powerful by design.

- Cockpit IQ connects in-line with your audio panel—just like a GoPro - mic. All processing happens locally. No cloud. No subscriptions. - Just intelligent, cockpit-ready support. + Cockpit IQ connects in-line with your headset cable, just like a + GoPro mic. All processing happens locally on the device, without + reliance on internet or satellite links. No clouds but the real + ones.